It's missing some things. The whole incident of people coming to see Cullen and then disappearing sounds familiar from a short story somewhere, but she never does describe much about it in this book. She refers to it, but doesn't ever go back to it. Why was she looking for those 2 people? Did she just substitute Rule and Yu instead? It needed more clarification.Also, they refer to the treaty between 2 groups, but it really doesn't seem to have any significance other than being something extra thrown in. Maybe it's just something to get her to Clanhome... I enjoyed the story a lot, but it feels like there were conflicting points in the plot at times to me. I'd like to hope that that will be resolved since I enjoyed the characters a lot. I wanted to give this 4 stars, but it just felt jumbled. Maybe it's because she was altering her original story to write this one?