What Ward does so well in her other books - the mixing of perspectives to slowly get you use to the next person - seemed a little over done in this one. I still loved the story, but I feel like I should have gotten more of V and Jane. I get why she goes back to John, but there was just a little too much of Phury in the book. There were moments when I almost forgot that V was the focus of this book. Also, the ending... umm... I'm not sure how I feel about what happens with Jane.